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Re: Speech /P
wisdom.. But in any case, there's nothing to be sorry for not doing while you were here. It's a tiny planet, swallowed in a big universe, and, using that same ...
May 27, 2005 -
Re: This is Not the End
This is really well thought.. unique see crimson and flesh only, where he tears his skin implusively silver metal frigid against his raw skin .. a bit drama? Well a ...
May 27, 2005 -
Re: SOS
Hey ballerina, won’t you come and sing me a song to-night? ballerina.. isn't that dancing and not sing? Anyway music...I know I could waltz across your heart and imprint your ...
May 27, 2005 -
Re: For my Father on his Birthday
Gal, it was very touching.. I liked it a lot too. I wish I could have such time writing something for my dad and such times and memories... It contain ...
May 22, 2005 -
Re: End of Eternal Sadness, Rebirth of Hope
but, Liz there is a kind a poem written in this kind of way... I don't know the name...I saw it once and tried to memorized but I don't know ...
May 22, 2005 -
Re: Collaboration(Hunter Helped)
I like it too.. :P Short but Strong.. :wink: Does this show Yoshi's feeling for people he cares for? It does to me (almost) or at least I understood it.. ...
May 14, 2005 -
Re: The Things I See
I like it TBR! Nice work... I don't think you need help by stop writing poetry.. You're a writer, a poet.. And a poet writes poems... They're your feelings... Just ...
May 14, 2005 -
Re: What Poetry Means to Me
Great piece of explanation, you got! 'even though the rhyming is bad and such..' Actually I liked the rhyming and especially that every line ended with 'Y' And the last ...
Apr 1, 2005 -
Re: new here
I love it when it rhymes. I makes the sentence strong to me. I like the words you've used. The last part: He loved them more than anyone could say, ...
Feb 25, 2005 -
Re: Everyone (16+)
Well I'm younger than I should be to read it. But I am really to young for this. (I don't know :? ) I think it's good, funny and the ...
Feb 19, 2005 -
Re: Desire This (+13)
I have read it five times. I don't know perfectly what it means. but this is what I understood. The person search for a hope and finds it. Even though ...
Feb 18, 2005
